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I just wrote a poem0 A. M! \; u/ [3 j+ O, P% P
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.; }4 o& L; J6 o8 S" j
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
. q3 x: ?. \, C; ]0 W3 c* t- NThanks a lot!!!
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3 Y+ D6 s9 j$ v" Y# v4 j. J% P& \Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
% \" R2 q/ v6 h' Q% q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
. Q, h6 {; H4 l) B0 K1 j5 |( ^9 D Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
; q7 S r; [0 i7 p) [ Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 3 H0 l) v4 n/ g6 a1 u' \
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
- @6 U% p/ x* y* ]$ W6 O Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness 1 k, M9 B- s. ~+ x( b
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday 3 f: P" N2 p; H1 \ ]" \
somehow I realized you were still in my heart % [; D6 L: D3 g3 _) h' `2 P+ {& G+ D
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
' A% G# L* n9 X) l somehow I lost myself inside again
$ m- m. s; v2 S& I- c/ {+ ]Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog ; f( C3 B1 q: U
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
- A' @' J+ A' Y2 [5 I( M6 h6 RFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
* p. Z# Z% ^5 v" @. { eBasically, I almost finish this poem6 o H w1 W1 Y/ c" ?8 S1 q
I am 一个人de精彩( h! F! M' X* g1 O$ \1 I9 r
I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.5 B- b6 \5 a& r y
But........ / s4 F) D( o {- m# e+ G- u. N- n
Ironically? Isn't it? |
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