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I just wrote a poem; l0 T$ {2 T+ ?) t9 D
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.* |. K1 J) r; G; m- C- X8 Z8 D
However,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem
( C+ e0 E( W- C: g' q1 W. s. BThanks a lot!!!
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- n' _0 i5 G! G/ @" E0 q8 LFormerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you 6 x- o6 H* p+ u% o, d5 Q2 I
Somehow I'd found something wrong with us ! z* v+ h+ X" | z! ]
Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world 8 y# |# e H+ w% s
Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me 1 j) y4 ^" y- f: l2 R
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind
+ c6 F% M4 ~% }6 t4 w7 G) V) n& @ Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness
I' M' h' y$ C- _7 ?% dHowever, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
# b8 u$ i) D: q$ l; x* i/ V somehow I realized you were still in my heart
: D% ^/ A2 a6 H5 g8 [8 C$ ?$ G somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
/ Z5 W t- w. U* O. t1 Y+ _) N8 k somehow I lost myself inside again % z; x: k3 s3 U% w$ X$ @1 w
Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog
/ X8 O: q% d ~6 `# @6 G somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion% J# f( P# c% N6 r& I- D) T% B
Finally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................1 C, ~' E) H) {: K- I) }
Basically, I almost finish this poem/ E5 q& Q; S* _, W: P
I am 一个人de精彩
3 `4 X3 V+ n+ p( `1 W$ I I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
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3 W4 `+ ]; y% y! {Ironically? Isn't it? |
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发表于 2008-1-27 12:42
