我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
8 m; r# \" v9 a6 Q: f; L是十多年前的作品了——
+ I8 M, V) a0 ySummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
From the colorful nature
To my life and dream.
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Following the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
% ?) {6 |. i) ]$ n( y6 MWashing my heart and soul.
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. N6 [; K2 M. a& ]" L# T9 o8 fGood-bye, my happy spring;
! e6 T. J" f5 j. N; g# p) |Good-bye, my childish dream.
# a9 ~; p: V" NI can prepare nothing;
1 ~' H5 H" R6 H- j. OMy life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

! d2 {- W- W) v! {0 P一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
3 U3 p. C  t4 U8 P8 hIt displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
) D. h, H6 f2 a& F; J1 H6 ]夏天来了