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我和我同学在学校写的诗

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发表于 2006-10-15 15:57 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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In whatever galaxy,                                               September 29th 2006,
5 C+ n/ g0 w2 [0 d1 z/ yI believe there must be creatures like ourselves  + b. |1 r% C; S) Y/ b
Dreamers5 X8 I* {2 L/ l# R/ n: F. [
Savages# E; N$ y6 v" F2 D; I8 D& z
Poets
- u# M) E. ^/ g  b6 d: O. VBuilders of canoes,
, H. z' ~4 o4 b6 ABlack smiths  ~( ^9 ?! B) w# B( F
Murderers,/ x* a% x! D2 j" }5 Q& ]6 h
Risk takers,* L, n# T2 h6 l# g/ y9 O2 M& @
My mind is full of curiosity and wonder
( K5 r: o. @) R$ }$ o  C: zAs I think of what could be. 4 N( @  H" N/ `" e
The world is so big to me
3 W: s8 F+ o$ M/ D( T6 N! R0 h) ?I wonder what it means to be0 F2 f, t& W6 i( w. Z
I looked up at the star and smiled 6 I1 k  w: z, `7 U% ~
They flashed as they have heard all I have read.
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发表于 2006-10-15 16:23 | 显示全部楼层
有点意思,有点意思。
- z, Y: g+ q+ {. X9 j- k评论这样的东东,偶还真的是完全外行,请马版出场吧。% S/ P! f$ b6 u" |8 E$ ]
顶一下,支持支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-15 16:41 | 显示全部楼层
Here am I,4 g* q+ B; Q+ j  @7 f
A poor old Guy;: R  Q2 [9 U3 B
Legs in a bonfire,+ L$ I! l8 y" G4 e3 N& s) ~. S% Q  u
Head in the sky
' _+ E- b. V3 O  K- P: S$ e+ t+ DLonely, with the feel of betray9 J3 E7 ]6 Y$ A
Heart empty and hollow
9 y* Y2 j/ {( `- YAlone I stand
) g; G' C4 ~# O6 H; CI am useless to all
: g% O$ N0 @2 @5 a2 W# ?7 CBut I wish I were a dove
* D9 ~% r6 X8 a& S, Q9 `# q' oGiving myself to the world, to the fire  M9 \! f/ E( r. _9 F
I feel like burning myself in to dust and fly with the wind3 e9 @; _" a6 H( B# L
I sent prayers to my god
2 S* U9 D0 X* `0 x  L/ }2 aThough he does not answer6 h1 p/ B/ f- S( J" @& D% ?& T
He bless me with the gift of hope
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发表于 2006-10-15 19:05 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
哇~~写不错哈
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 楼主| 发表于 2006-10-16 18:55 | 显示全部楼层
是么?谢谢。(是我和同学一起写的哦!)
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发表于 2006-10-16 19:04 | 显示全部楼层
有点诗人的激情和想象力。+ D3 l" \' c7 R0 A! B
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